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Jason McBride
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Hello, Sun-Touched Dreamers!

Today, I’m stealing from two incredible poets,

Jonathan Potter
and
Brian Funke
.

Jonathan shares his sunrise poems and photos every morning. Not only is each poem masterfully crafted and a moving tribute to the beauty of each day, but his work has also motivated me to pay much closer attention to each dawn I’m blessed to experience. Today, I’m sharing a sunrise haiku comic.

Brian shares his poetry and then artfully explicates his process for a given poem a week or so later. Today, I’m going to lay my process bare for the writing of this haiku.

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ethereal glow
puts Cascades in silhouette
autumnal sunrise

When I Saw the Ethereal Glow

On Tuesday, October 31st I was driving back from dropping off the kids at school when I was stunned by the beauty of the dawn. On the driver’s side of the car was a set of train tracks and the eastern sky.

It was one of the most spectacular sights I’d ever seen, and I’ve seen a lot of sunrises from mountaintops, beaches, forests, and other scenic locales.

One of my first thoughts was, “I wish I could read what Jonathan Potter would make of this sunrise.” Then I remembered I’m also a poet, and thought I’d like to give a sunrise poem a shot.

The rest of this post is for paying subscribers. Below this paywall, you will find my discussion of my writing process for this poem, including my notebook entry. Paid subscribers get full access to Tuesday and Thursday posts and FREE digital copies of my books and zines as they are released. You can click the button below to upgrade your subscription or to get a FREE trial.

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