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Mary Lee Hahn's avatar

Thanks for the word "githerments" and for the encouragement at the end of every newsletter to "Be the weird you want to see in the world!"

Jason McBride's avatar

My pleasure! Amy Stewert is the original source for this use of githerments. It's such a delightful word!

Johanna Haas's avatar

I love your untraditional haibun. Great interweaving of poetry with meaningful story. It touched me, and I've never lived near the sea.

Jason McBride's avatar

Thanks, Johanna! That is a wonderfully kind thing to say!

Joshua Robinson's avatar

Really lovely and inspiring! 🌊

Jason McBride's avatar

Thank you, Joshua! The ocean is a never-ending source of inspiration for me

Karol Koszorz's avatar

I have the same thing with Lincoln Beach and the Pacific, but for the Atlantic and Inch Beach. We go their every year with my family, camped there a few times. One time, I walked its entire length, only to find a massive green plastic container, which I proceeded to uncover by digging for 5 hours (+got sunburnt), pushed it up an even more massive dune and skid down (with a lot of jumping forward because it wasn't very aero-duneamic) inside it (recorded that part and it's always a great story to share).

Loved this haibun (the one from last year too):)

Jason McBride's avatar

Thanks, Karol! Your adventure with the green container on Inch Beach sounds very cinematic!

Liz Gauffreau's avatar

I love your graphic haibun! All the parts work beautifully together. You even made animated waves at the end for a little bonus!!

Jason McBride's avatar

Thanks, Liz! I couldn't help myself with animation, 🤣 It's my first try at animating the ocean, I'm building skills for another collection of animated haiku in the hopefully not too distant future

Liz Gauffreau's avatar

You're welcome, Jason! I look forward to the next collection of animated haiku!

Amy Stewart's avatar

Oh, this is so interesting! My next book is about bodies of water, and weirdly, all sorts of interesting water-related stuff is coming my way today (not including the water-related stuff falling out of the sky right now)

Jason McBride's avatar

Thanks, Amy! A book about bodies of water sounds incredible! And thank you for the wonderful word, githerments. It really put a name to something and solidified several things for me!

Richbee's avatar

Beach

Waves

Driftwood

Sand

Dollars

Pay

Their

Share.

Jason McBride's avatar

I love this!!!

Kerry Sutherland's avatar

Love this - I adore the ocean but unfortunately live in Ohio, so . . .

Jason McBride's avatar

That's a bit of a drive! But I am jealous of your relative proximity to the Great Lakes; I haven't yet been to these wonderful inland freshwater seas.