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Us: An exchange

Us: An exchange

Community: Part 3

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Here is part 3 of the poetry exchange I'm doing with Brian Funke. This is Brian's beautiful poem, "Us". -
Jason McBride


An exchange: Community

This month’s exchange is on the topic of Community, a series of six pieces written over the past three months, poems from Brian Funke, author of Poetry & Process, and Jason McBride, author of Weirdo Poetry. A newsletter will be published daily for six days, exploring different aspects of Community, each publication responding to and building on the prior piece from the collaborating artist. Read along and consider your own community with themes of childhood, friendship, love, broken community, leaving and returning, solitude, nature, searching, parenting, and promises.

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I hope you enjoy this collaborative effort on Community.

Community: Part 1 | Part 2 | Part 3 | Part 4 | Part 5 | Part 6


Us

Brian Funke

brown wooden seat on brown soil
Photo by A S
These words could not 
be part of the picture, 
only a fleeting attempt 
to frame our masterpiece
which has no border,
that was the mistake,
my words among our words,
my words simple words
that should have been swallowed
as we are inaudibly spoken 
in the inverse space   
between each of us.

To fill that place with sound
that has its own reverberation,	
to build wooden stools in a place
where we are meant to run,
to lay claim to liquid 
that can only slip between our fingers
as it is meant to flow forever
is to deny a life to what exists 
alive among us.

Let us each return.

You bring your sketch
and I will bring my pages,
there will be his polaroids
and her prints and paintings,
we can cut these pieces
and glue them beautifully back together,
stitched in a new way,
a new collage,
rebirth 
of what there was before.

Us was written as a reflection on Jason’s poem, Suburban Lost Boys, specifically the line “We all loved each other without having to say it”. There is a challenge that can arrive in community when words are used to define what exists naturally in the community. There is certainly a necessity of language between people, but I believe labels often create limitations in the potential of community, or at their worst are used to prevent necessary growth and evolution.

The theme of collage art was prompted by Jason’s beautiful art that he pairs with his haiku throughout WeirdoPoetry. You’ll get additional flavors of this art in a future edition of An exchange: Community, publishing again tomorrow.


Thank you for reading! Please leave a comment about what strikes you, speaks to you, or stirs in you while you read. Perhaps reflect on the question, have you been part of a community that thrived, then faltered?

Part 4 of Community is coming tomorrow! Until then…

May you be brave in returning.

Brian

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