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Gloria Horton-Young's avatar

So very lovely.

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Jason McBride's avatar

Thank you!

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Stanley Wotring's avatar

We are all part of something bigger than ourselves.

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Awww

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Jason McBride's avatar

Discovering this is one of life's greatest joys!

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Daniel Hettenbach's avatar

That's good.

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Jason McBride's avatar

Thank you!

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Saumya Sharma's avatar

This is so beautiful, why am I so sad 😭

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Jason McBride's avatar

Thanks! I think it's the bittersweet nature of life. Every transition is an exciting new opportunity and a heartbreaking goodbye to familiar ways and people. The great haiku masters tried to capture this sense as wabi-sabi in their poems.

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Saumya Sharma's avatar

The way you presented it was phenomenal.

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Brian Funke's avatar

I especially like the artwork of the confluence points. Lovely piece!

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Jason McBride's avatar

Thank you! Those were definitely the hardest things for me to figure how to illustrate! I decided figurative looked better than being too literal

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Free Radio Rulo's avatar

Nice! I love the mix of poetry and art!

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Jason McBride's avatar

Thank you! This type of work is my favorite thing to create!

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Minor Fossil's avatar

I love the artwork for this one.

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Amber's avatar

totally agree. I am not much of a reader and so immediately find myself scrolling to images

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Jason McBride's avatar

One of the reasons I started making comics, graphic essays, and poetry comics was to help make my writing more accessible for my ADHD daughter, and others who find it difficult to process blocks of text, for whatever reason. So I love that you enjoyed scrolling to the images!

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Jason McBride's avatar

Thanks!

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Marilyn Peterlin's avatar

Love to this

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Jason McBride's avatar

Thanks!

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Priya Iyer's avatar

Love this, Jason!

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Jason McBride's avatar

Thank you!

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David Wagenfeld's avatar

Beautiful!

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Jason McBride's avatar

Thanks!

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Thank you. This is reading like a picture book for adults and kids.

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Jason McBride's avatar

You don't know how much this comment warms my heart. I recently discovered a notebook that I thought I had lost back in 2021. One of the notes in there is a question I asked myself, "What do I want to create?" I scribbled down, "Make picture books for grown-ups". And that's what I've been trying to figure out how to do ever since.

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

How amazing is that? Thank you for sharing this. Wow! Unbelievable… same words. But hey, this is what you’re doing here. Amongst other things.

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Pamela's avatar

This is so touching! The song that went thru my head at first was Ripple.

In the area of Western Kentucky where I grew up had the 2 huge lakes & dams. There was also a spot in the town of Paducah which has a flood wall with murals on each section. The confluence of three rivers that flows to where those lakes & dams are. It was something I learned in school which I didn’t really get it until I could drive and hang out on the inside of the edge of the confluence. It was so very peaceful - I read the signs about the area and my local geography class finally stuck!

I love the way you have described the flow of the creek & the lake. It sounds like a wonderful place.

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Jason McBride's avatar

Thank you so much, Pamela! Pringle Creek is a pretty wonderful place.

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Amber's avatar

lovely pictures

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Jason McBride's avatar

Thank you!

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Caro Henry's avatar

Lovely, simply lovely! Thank you, Jason.

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Jason McBride's avatar

Thanks for reading! I'm happy that you enjoyed it!

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Patris's avatar

So compellingly beautiful and yet overwhelming as I imagine morphing from one kind of water to a deeper, darker place, lost.

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Jason McBride's avatar

Thanks! I do think that thinking about expansion and eternity is almost too much for our primate brains to handle!

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Patris's avatar

Likely though the concept of egos dissolving into quiet space doesn’t horrify me as it once did.

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Jason McBride's avatar

I also am more comfortable with this idea than I was even a few years ago.

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just mud by Ron's avatar

Confluence. I'm likin it, Jason!

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Jason McBride's avatar

Thanks!

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