Love the sense of humor. I’m not a poet but I love words. Your poems are pithy and pack a punch... alliteration, I know, but the sentiment is real. I just joined Substack and you are one of my first ‘subscriptions’. Because of your wit with words. Thank you for that!🙃
Thanks! This is a shame free zone! The problem is likely in my execution not your reception. The last two comics aren't meant to be hilarious (although with my dark sense of humor I find the butterfly one funny and I just think old cars on lonely roads are kind of funny)
Love the sense of humor. I’m not a poet but I love words. Your poems are pithy and pack a punch... alliteration, I know, but the sentiment is real. I just joined Substack and you are one of my first ‘subscriptions’. Because of your wit with words. Thank you for that!🙃
Thank you! I'm honored to be among your first Substack reads!
He’s so worth it
Fun with my grandson
A gentle cough as he laughs
Slams me with slumber
Sue… PERFECT!!!!
Your last line here brings back so many memories of sleeping next to my kids when they were younger and having them slam me with slumber! Great haiku!
Great, comical and educational!
Thanks!
Headline of article on decor:
"Get the chandelier you deserve!"
Signature: Hop-Frog
This is great!
Be the weird!
So great - art words lesson.
Love the art. Am working on getting some if the humour… ((hangs head in shame))
Thanks! This is a shame free zone! The problem is likely in my execution not your reception. The last two comics aren't meant to be hilarious (although with my dark sense of humor I find the butterfly one funny and I just think old cars on lonely roads are kind of funny)
I will get there! Thank you for the shame free zone! Hahaha
Great stuff upon great stuff per usual
Thanks!
This is challenge!
what did the mummy
say to the vampire's son?
I am your real mum
Yes! This is great! I can't wait to torture my kids with this joke haiku
packing suitcases
my dog tries to fold himself
up like a sweater
My sweet little. dog is not happy to see me packing for a trip.
Oh this is so sweet💚
I love this! My dog gets so depressed the moment he spies any kind of bag that might indicate a trip
Love this breakdown, thanks!
Awesome, love the interconnects ness of humor horror and haiku (and alliteration)!!
Thanks!
stand on the rock to
avoid Superior waves
she has other plans
I love this! Does this happen to be about Lake Superior?
How’d you guess? 😊
Especially love the skeptic haiku and the art. Great discussion and examples to illustrate the cutting word or line!
Thank you!
Excellent break down and a really unique take on the haiku that I've enjoyed discovering. Thanks for this.