And haiku comics as modern-day haiga
LOVE the gif!! 💞
I do, too!
Hey Jason, loved this article particularly because I see „geography of the imagination” as one of the purposes my poetry, to bring to life memories of the walks I have been on and the things I have seen.
For this week’s haikus:
Objective:
The sun masked by fog
Colourshifts incessantly
There is no escape
Subjective:
A floating orange
Turns into a smooth lemon
Perhaps a lightbulb
Two great ones! I'm quite fond of the dreamlike quality of your subjective haiku
Insightful!!!! By the way, started recommending you 🙌
Thanks, Paolo!
I like the ideas in this post. I have tried objective and subjective haiku. (Thanks for validating this practice!)
I love this piece beacause i recognize the reasons why I write Haikus:
https://open.substack.com/pub/rolandoandrade/p/the-brightest-shadow?utm_source=share&utm_medium=android&r=20ov80
Thanks!
Objective haiku:
The day sleeps in rain
cloud cover pulled up tight
pitter patter dreams
Monotone grey sky
lulls my body in yawning
dulls the consciousness
Great haiku, Thomas. They both perfectly capture the ways I also experience gray days.
I love haiku, haiga, and haiban. I haiga appears at the beginning of this post.
https://rayzimmerman.substack.com/p/haiku-drawing
"They capture the story of a moment, and are less like snapshots than they are GIFS."
Thank you for articulating this...
I had not heard of haiga before, but it makes total sense. I like how you use wordless titles to affect the pacing of your haiku comics.
Thanks, Raymond! I like to think of a moment of silent contemplation as being the invisible fourth line of a haiku.
Lovely.
Greet the fading moon
Rejoice in its bright return
Moon gazer sleeps late.
This is a good one, Ray! I love sleeping late after moon-gazing!
LOVE the gif!! 💞
I do, too!
Hey Jason, loved this article particularly because I see „geography of the imagination” as one of the purposes my poetry, to bring to life memories of the walks I have been on and the things I have seen.
For this week’s haikus:
Objective:
The sun masked by fog
Colourshifts incessantly
There is no escape
Subjective:
A floating orange
Turns into a smooth lemon
Perhaps a lightbulb
Two great ones! I'm quite fond of the dreamlike quality of your subjective haiku
Insightful!!!! By the way, started recommending you 🙌
Thanks, Paolo!
I like the ideas in this post. I have tried objective and subjective haiku. (Thanks for validating this practice!)
I love this piece beacause i recognize the reasons why I write Haikus:
https://open.substack.com/pub/rolandoandrade/p/the-brightest-shadow?utm_source=share&utm_medium=android&r=20ov80
Thanks!
Objective haiku:
The day sleeps in rain
cloud cover pulled up tight
pitter patter dreams
Subjective:
Monotone grey sky
lulls my body in yawning
dulls the consciousness
Great haiku, Thomas. They both perfectly capture the ways I also experience gray days.
I love haiku, haiga, and haiban. I haiga appears at the beginning of this post.
https://rayzimmerman.substack.com/p/haiku-drawing
"They capture the story of a moment, and are less like snapshots than they are GIFS."
Thank you for articulating this...
I had not heard of haiga before, but it makes total sense. I like how you use wordless titles to affect the pacing of your haiku comics.
Thanks, Raymond! I like to think of a moment of silent contemplation as being the invisible fourth line of a haiku.
Lovely.
Greet the fading moon
Rejoice in its bright return
Moon gazer sleeps late.
This is a good one, Ray! I love sleeping late after moon-gazing!