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Welcome back!

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Thanks! I missed this a lot more than i thought I would!

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hammock stretched between

two trees near the river shore

like the haiku form

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Great haiku! That sounds heavenly!

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Thank you, Jason, for your inspiration and love of haiku. It just so happens I was going to post a haiku today about something that gave me a literal flash of insight and awe. Then I remembered a stream of haiku I wrote just a few weeks ago and may include those as well. You're right. Life is pretty good when you can repose in some comfortable, safe place with poetry nearby, either in a book or within your own head. Rest easy, my friend, and let the stream flow.

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Thank you! And thank you for your support of this crazy project of mine!

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Welcome back. I’ve often thought I can get through most things as long as I have a book with me -partly for oblivion, partly for hope. Sending good wishes.

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I love that idea of partly for oblivion and partly for hope. That's a great description.

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A familiar sight

Heron at the stream’s edge

Her eye on the prize

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I love the heron as a symbol of hope!

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It’s good to have you back! I enjoyed reading this a lot! Thank you for linking my latest upload!

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My pleasure! I love seeing more people experiment with haiku.

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So glad to "see" you again Jason!!! I'm glad you're finding comfort where you can. I hope it's a comfor to you to know that I missed you and that I appreciate you so much!!!

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It's nice to be missed. I missed you and the rest of this community so much I had to come back earlier than planned!

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I'll be glad to see you whenever you're able - just take good care of yourself.

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Books, coffee, you and me

Walks by the river our hands sometimes

Together our hearts always

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I love that haiku! Those last two lines are especially beautiful!

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💚💚💚💚

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Jul 20, 2023Liked by Jason McBride

moonlight streaming in

turns my bedroom to silver

I feel like a star

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I love the idea of feeling like a star because of the moonlight! Thanks for sharing this wonderful haiku!

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July. Western wind.

Ink spilled from indigo clouds

stains the mango moon.

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Fantastic! I love the mango moon!

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slow in the morning

drowning in my emotions

silence through the day

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Great haiku!

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thank you

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early morning hike

dewy forest glistening✨

washing fears away

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I’m wishing your family peace and rest through this trying season.💚

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I love the imagery of the dew washing your fears away as you hike!

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Ann, beautiful haiku!

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Jenise, thank you 😊

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under the moonlight

scent of soft honeysuckle—

a quiet breeze lifts

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I love that you used the scent of the honeysuckle in this poem. Your haiku makes me want to sit on the porch at night and gossip with old friends

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sweet and magical thought :)

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Lovely!

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Jul 21, 2023·edited Jul 21, 2023Liked by Jason McBride

Waves, ancient, timeless

wash over me with kindness

renewing my soul

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Welcome back, Jason.

Take your time; your readers will be here for you.

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Thanks! I love your haiku! Waves do feel ancient and timeless to me

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Appreciate you, Jason!

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Beautiful words. Kindness is everything 🌿

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My first haiku in a long time:

Wispy steam rises

Hands wrapped around the cup

First sip for comfort

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I love the whole picture you painted with this one. It feels very calm and zen--focused on a subtle moment

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Thanks, Jason! Tweaked it a bit to get it to 5-7-5 and maybe work better?

Wispy steam rises

My hands wrapped around a cup

First sip of comfort

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Amen, brother.

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